Offsiders postion

I applied for an offsiders position an offsiders position and me a qualified printer

I seemed to fit all the criteria

This is the response

Thank you for application regarding the above position.After carefully reviewing your details, we regret to inform you that you have been unsuccessful due to our client's specific requirements.Your background and experience is impressive however, so with your permission we shall retain your details on file and communicate with you further should a position arise which we feel would be of interest to you. While at this time we were not able to assist you in your job placement, we would like to thank you for your interest in taking the time to submit your application. Please accept our best wishes for the future and should you see another role on our website, we would welcome your application.Kind RegardsThe Team @ Integrated Group

This is mine

Dear Sir,

Having thought this over, I feel that your advertisement for your client should have been more specific in its request.
A “shotgun” approach leads to excessive work culling the unsuitable applications.

Should you require any assistance in the drafting and correct wording of advertisements for your clients in the printing industry in the future please don’t hesitate to contact me, as I can assist you in this to ensure that other people like myself are not inconvenienced.

The added bonus of this is it will lead to a lighter workload for you.

Kind regards